This story is interesting and gripping from the first few paragraphs. I am a huge fan of the isekai genre, and reading this plays an anime in my head! Seven did an amazing job of illustrating the scenes with his word play. Also everyone’s favorite plot device Truck Kun makes an appearance!
Definitely give this Novel a try if you like isekai storys! Now shower Seven with powerstones and collections! Have them rain from the skys above!
It's not another isekai novel you can find anywhere. It's a cliche starting novel written in a very new way with the author's funny imagination. Good writing, straight to development without almost no grammar mistakes.
Although I know a lot of readers bored with the isekai novels, give it a try. I am sure You will not be disappointed.
Great work, Author, the hype around this book has been unquestionable and I should admit that this book made me both eager to get my hands on it and I enjoyed every page...
Please upload more chapters, I am waiting for it..
Hope your work should get a big hit and massive votes...
Forgive me for my bluntness in this review. I really do not have a personal grudge against the author; he is actually one of my good friends. And honestly, besides the writing quality portion, the review isn't much of a roast.
Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American.
Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record.
Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled.
Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live.
World Background: Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced.
the story was good but before you get into this novel im at chap 61 and the story is done settling its premise since its slow read atleast were im at because it wont immediately hook you and the synopsis made me not want to read it but give it a try
Seven has done some amazing work so far and, from what I have read of this new project, that streak of awesome bossness is not going to end anytime soon. Keep up the good work Seven and may the Seven Sages of seven millennia bring glory and honor to this webnovel.
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This story is interesting and gripping from the first few paragraphs. I am a huge fan of the isekai genre, and reading this plays an anime in my head! Seven did an amazing job of illustrating the scenes with his word play. Also everyone’s favorite plot device Truck Kun makes an appearance!
Definitely give this Novel a try if you like isekai storys! Now shower Seven with powerstones and collections! Have them rain from the skys above!
It's not another isekai novel you can find anywhere. It's a cliche starting novel written in a very new way with the author's funny imagination. Good writing, straight to development without almost no grammar mistakes.
Although I know a lot of readers bored with the isekai novels, give it a try. I am sure You will not be disappointed.
What does that Itsuki say? ~~nya
Please upload more chapters, I am waiting for it..
Hope your work should get a big hit and massive votes...
Seven here [Shameless Review]
Well it's my second novel on wn, and if you have read my first one, then you must know how much Innocent of a writer I am
Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American.
Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record.
Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled.
Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live.
World Background: Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced.
Work hard, Ansu chan (seven)!