Writing quality has some flaws to it but eventually what really matters is the flow and how fun it is to actually read and although it has some mistakes but nothing major.The prompt is a sage from presumably a fantasy-type world with magic transmigrating to a cultivation world and within that cultivation world, he seems to want to explore whatever he couldn't in his original fantasy world. Not many chapters have been released as of yet but in my opinion, while the prompt is really good, way too much stuff happens within those 11 chapters and it's just really tiring. Like the young master that took a good portion of 2 chapters for pretty much nothing, He might encounter the young master's family later or he won't but eventually, it's not really interesting to have this entire subplot branch out from just him bumping into someone. In 12 chapters he cured some city lord's daughter, fought with a young master from a tycoon family, saved a young lady of another house, combined the different energies he had and some other more minor events but I hope you get that these are all pretty big events and are the buildup for the rest of story atm and it just seems really rushed to me to just give each of these subplots barely 1 chapter and moreover this 1 chapter for each of them occupies a huge part of the 12 chapters that have been released so far so we don't get much info on the world background like the strength of cultivators, what even are cultivators in the first place - cultivators in other novels can definitely cast spells even outside of arrays so are cultivators in this world only able to strengthen their physique and practice martial skills? I can only assume he bought a cultivation technique of the lowest grade because of the price which is odd since either way from what you said it takes a lot of time and effort to transfer from one technique to another. Also, these little bits that are seemingly meaningless like him showing off his 'wealth' to some random attendant that is for some reason arrogant and it just doesn't make much sense for a clerk to be arrogant I mean most of their job is just being courteous.TL: DR - It feels to me that way too many events and flags are being squeezed into these 12 chapters. Creating the new energy for example should be a really big event and not some random thing that gets overshadowed by him overstaying in the cultivation room. IMO more time should be invested into expanding on the world background specifically the cultivation system before we start with all of these events (i.e. interaction with other characters that seems crucial to the plot).
I'm voting for this it's unique and I want to see him cause chaos on the games and the real world but I hope it doesn't go full China is the best and people provoking MC on all direction
Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
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This is a good start but I really want you to stop delaying the next chapter. I love stories that have the main character use knowledge of the future to make his life better than before. The poor to rich story line is also good as long as the main character doesn't get too rich too fast. Fast increase in strength is okay as long as the character doesn't forget to take time to learn control. It would also be okay for the MC to kill rapist, murderers, slavers, and rich assholes who take pleasure in destroying the lives of innocents in brutal and painful ways. Those that molest and brutalize children don't deserve the comfort of death. The MC should make sure to give them fates worse than death that will make readers laugh or feel satisfied.
I would love to read your books but from how many times u have dropped the others I’m not ready to go through it again, maybe when it gets to about 300 I’ll come back
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