Everything in this novel is great, stories great, characters are great(specially the MC, not one dimensional like the rest of the original authors in this website who copies Chinese authors characters, which just ends up a poor imitation of them, which is quite honestly embarrassing). The chapters are long which is great.
The chapters format is great (very convenient to read on phone). The world could be fleshed out more though but that can be fixed in later chapters.
The only problem with this novel, is the update for chapters but I guess it’ the price for quality.
PS Authors who are reading this, learn from this author on how to make an OP character in his story, be interesting and great to read.
I personally see no flaws in the story, characters, or world. The author has written a true neutral evil anti-hero and it’s beautiful. For a undead all the main character’s actions make sense for the way he should think. I look forward to his character development and wonder if he will find any shreds of humanity in him left over from his previous life as a human and how that will affect his goals in the world.
I already wrote a review but I just took a huge blow from the awesomeness of your story with chapter 99 so here I go! I absolutely adore your work, your words, your universe, your characters, your plot. I mean isn't it too much of a great story? Just how far do intend to go with this creativity of yours?
Every description just left my brain mushy with gory pictures and I'm startled to see how much I enjoy it! Please oh please, keep writing
This is a seriously great novel. Gotta love the main lead and even the way all the other characters relate to him. If you have ever watched rick and morty, this is seriously similar. The rick is complete eith portals and a dubious moral compass as he manipulates his morty. The morty is completely pulled along for the ride. They have their little spats where the morty tries to separate himself and do some good in the world. But in the end he is pulled along for all the escapades, he even occasionally lets loose old women who then proceed to destroy stuff.
10/10 novel. Only improvement could be 30 chaps/day.
The story is amazing. The interactions between characters is well done and the personalities of each character is well developed. Furthermore, the world building is described in detail. My only problem is that the chapters aren't released often enough. I understand that the chapters are a bit longer but all I want is a chapter released every other day at least.
definitely a gem of a novel, im so glad that this was in my recommendations!!!! reading that back that sounds kinda sarcastic, but i honestly really love this book so far, more than most ive read. definitely deserves top 20 maybe even top 10 once more chapters start stacking up. i hope you stick with this one author, you could really make a career out of this with how talented you are :)
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The chapters format is great (very convenient to read on phone). The world could be fleshed out more though but that can be fixed in later chapters.
The only problem with this novel, is the update for chapters but I guess it’ the price for quality.
PS Authors who are reading this, learn from this author on how to make an OP character in his story, be interesting and great to read.
One of diamonds among the trash in this app.
Every description just left my brain mushy with gory pictures and I'm startled to see how much I enjoy it! Please oh please, keep writing
10/10 novel. Only improvement could be 30 chaps/day.
Highly recommended story.
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