Primordial Vampire God System

Gotta say I really enjoy the novel so far! I think it has lots of potential especially if the author keeps up and gets a more regular release schedule. I think if this novel breaks 300 chapters more people will be flocking to support it.

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Yeah

You are my fire
The one desire
Believe when I say
I want it that way

But we are two worlds apart
Can't reach to your heart
When you say
That I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way

Am I your fire?
Your one desire
Yes, I know it's too late
But I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way

Now I can see that we've fallen apart
From the way that it used to be, yeah
No matter the distance
I want you to know
That deep down inside of me

You are my fire
The one desire
You are (you are, you are, you are)

Don't wanna hear you say
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Ain't nothin' but a mistake (don't wanna hear you say)
I never wanna hear you say (oh, yeah)
I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothing but a mistake
Tell me why
I never want to hear you say (never wanna hear you say)
I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never want to hear you say (don't want to hear you say)
I want it that way

'Cause I want it that way

finally! a book with war setting that won't get wishy washed by morals like I won't kill innocents!!
or a book about a non human MC but still cares for the other race!! like a demon king yet still saves human!! CHOOSE YOUR OWN RACE FOR MY SANITY'S SAKE! I HOPE THIS CONTINUES!! I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!

I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.

Felt important so i think i should talk about this.
i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits.
-he kills innocents.
-he is naive and reckless.
-he likes to fight and get stronger.
-he does not like to read.

of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything.
He will change and get better.
Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress.
please be patient with him and me.


hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say.
I hope have a great time reading.

THIS IS GOOD...........................................................................................................
I WANT VIOLENCE.............................................

Hey

[Final Score] ⭐⭐⭐⭐

[Writing  Quality] ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Pretty good, a few typos here and there but they aren't common.

[Stability of Updates]   ⭐⭐⭐
The author can miss a day or two but the usual upload schedule is once a day

[Story Development] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
It's a pretty good novel I must say. The main character starts off as irritating and does dumb mistakes but he learns from them and doesn't repeat them. I really liked the idea of vampires who were at the top of the chain, feared by all turning into an oppressed race and slowly but surely starting to stand for themselves to overpower every opposer and stand proud as the strongest and feared race

[Character Design] ⭐⭐⭐
The character designs are not bad, they're what you expect of a vampire novel.

[World Background] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Absolutely love the lore behind the world and I hope we'll get more info on different countries, kingdoms, religions, etc.