Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

I didn’t realize they let litttle kids write here, the story is worse then invisble dragon.

Avoid to save brain cells, or face becoming braindead like the author,

Its annoying, author doesn't use proper grammar, doesn't know how to use words correctly, and doesn't know how to add periods at the end of paragraphs.

Who made the cover?

Writing quality is in urgent need of an upgrade, if you dont get an editor or something to help with the quality I cant see this story being anything enjoyable to read.

it's kinda annoying how the author talks like hes in the past but all so the future and he restates the same thing like five times. The book isn't bad it also isn't great.

Get a proofreader, dear god.

MC literally is a meathead who only cares about fighting and is so redundant to the point where he will repeat the same thing more than once in a single paragraph.

great story and thank you for novel .                                                                                                      .

Great novel the only problem is i finished reading and waiting for update thanks for the novel and thanks for the exp