Update: Mass Release of 25+ Chapters coming on Nov 1st, 2021!
I have been working hard to get this one back on track after the small hiatus due to IRL issues. Hope everyone will his or her enjoyment in what is to come!
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author created this novel. Great world-building and narration surpassing mine. Splendid writing quality and fluency of narration.
ADVICE
None, the author was a better author and his work was something I have to learn to. Kudos!
I haven't read it coz i'm gonna stockpile the chapters but since i read author's other novel the last primal i know this will be a quality work too so for support i will give it 5 stars. I believe this will be a blast similar to the last primal
First of all, let me say thank you for even giving me the chance and clicking on this little story of mine. I’m gonna be honest, this is my second story, and it wasn’t born in the greatest of circumstances. Without wanting to bore you much with the details, I got sick at the beginning of 2021 and spent more than a month in hospital. I felt miserable, thinking that ‘this would be it, this is how my story ends.’
Luckily, I managed to get better and eventually return home. However, during that short period of depression, I sketched up the outline of this story. I loved superhero comics and stories, and I always had this idea to one day make one with my own ideas.
Prime Evolver System is the culmination of these desires and wishes. While I am trying to make something unique and original and not follow the same script of “Everyone has superpowers due to an invasion of some interdimensional/alien hostile race and after a long and arduous battle there was a temporary ceasefire approach.”
Anyway, I’m not trying to name and shame here, just wanted to try to convey that what I decided to do here may not be the already trusted, generic approach, but instead, a unique and unexplored new path. My path. Our path.
Okay, enough of my love letter. :)
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STORY: Although I do not want to spoil anything about it, the main character will a small orphaned little boy called Lucien Shaw. Due to… khm, special circumstances revolving around his birth, he has a pretty rough childhood, ultimately ending in a secret government facility where he spends the latter stages of his youth living the life of an experimental test subject.
He spends 5 years here until eventually something inside him snaps when they finally go too far and sever his right arm…
CHARACTERS: There’s a wide range of cast that I have meticulously flashed out. Each of them has its own personalities, own goals, and desires. Even if it seems like someone at first glance seems boring and 1 dimensional, trust me when I say, there may be more under the hood. ;)
WRITING QUALITY: Ehrm… I know I have an ongoing problem, that I am working my hardest to fix. If you spot an occasional typo or a mistake, don’t be afraid to point it out to me. I will try my best to fix them even if there are 300 or so chapters completed already!
STABILITY OF UPDATES: This is the one that most are usually interested in. :) Just like with my other novel (The Last Primal) I am planning to write 7 chapters between 1500-1700 words each and every day.
If something happens to me and makes me unable to fulfill this mission of mine, I will make sure to let you all know.
WORLD BACKGROUND: Whilst a good chunk of the story will be played in the modern, urban society that we all know, I can’t wait to show you my version of the apocalypse! Not gonna lie, I am a great fan of the theme, and always wished to write a story about it! :D
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In case you have any questions, don’t hesitate to let me know. Like usually, I always do my best to answer every question.
An excellent and good novel and a novel that is not without the latest. But what I hate about the novel is Sera's character. You know that your whole life is suffering and suffering and no one at that time can help you. He's just watching you ache, your skin sloughing off, your bones severing, and he's waiting for your strength to wake up. What if it takes so long for him to wake up. I don't see the difference between her and that crazy doctor. Especially when you wear that cute and sincere smile that disgusts me
Really cool world and a very interesting idea for science fiction! The quality of writing is higher than usual considering this is Webnovel, always a nice thing to see! Good story overall
Popular Reviews
I have been working hard to get this one back on track after the small hiatus due to IRL issues. Hope everyone will his or her enjoyment in what is to come!
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author created this novel. Great world-building and narration surpassing mine. Splendid writing quality and fluency of narration.
ADVICE
None, the author was a better author and his work was something I have to learn to. Kudos!
First of all, let me say thank you for even giving me the chance and clicking on this little story of mine. I’m gonna be honest, this is my second story, and it wasn’t born in the greatest of circumstances. Without wanting to bore you much with the details, I got sick at the beginning of 2021 and spent more than a month in hospital. I felt miserable, thinking that ‘this would be it, this is how my story ends.’
Luckily, I managed to get better and eventually return home. However, during that short period of depression, I sketched up the outline of this story. I loved superhero comics and stories, and I always had this idea to one day make one with my own ideas.
Prime Evolver System is the culmination of these desires and wishes. While I am trying to make something unique and original and not follow the same script of “Everyone has superpowers due to an invasion of some interdimensional/alien hostile race and after a long and arduous battle there was a temporary ceasefire approach.”
Anyway, I’m not trying to name and shame here, just wanted to try to convey that what I decided to do here may not be the already trusted, generic approach, but instead, a unique and unexplored new path. My path. Our path.
Okay, enough of my love letter. :)
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STORY: Although I do not want to spoil anything about it, the main character will a small orphaned little boy called Lucien Shaw. Due to… khm, special circumstances revolving around his birth, he has a pretty rough childhood, ultimately ending in a secret government facility where he spends the latter stages of his youth living the life of an experimental test subject.
He spends 5 years here until eventually something inside him snaps when they finally go too far and sever his right arm…
CHARACTERS: There’s a wide range of cast that I have meticulously flashed out. Each of them has its own personalities, own goals, and desires. Even if it seems like someone at first glance seems boring and 1 dimensional, trust me when I say, there may be more under the hood. ;)
WRITING QUALITY: Ehrm… I know I have an ongoing problem, that I am working my hardest to fix. If you spot an occasional typo or a mistake, don’t be afraid to point it out to me. I will try my best to fix them even if there are 300 or so chapters completed already!
STABILITY OF UPDATES: This is the one that most are usually interested in. :) Just like with my other novel (The Last Primal) I am planning to write 7 chapters between 1500-1700 words each and every day.
If something happens to me and makes me unable to fulfill this mission of mine, I will make sure to let you all know.
WORLD BACKGROUND: Whilst a good chunk of the story will be played in the modern, urban society that we all know, I can’t wait to show you my version of the apocalypse! Not gonna lie, I am a great fan of the theme, and always wished to write a story about it! :D
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In case you have any questions, don’t hesitate to let me know. Like usually, I always do my best to answer every question.