Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
https://rb.gy/5s05wc

This is worse than terrible. There is no point to the story almost all the way up to twenty chapters. User unnecessarily writes about a great many scenes in many countries with no purpose what so ever. The government scenes are supposed to add a great twist, but all they ever do is increase speed by a little.

It's like author imagines him self writing a master piece by borrowing many cliches. At the end of the day, result achieved is a thousand unrelated little pieces scattered all over resembling trash.

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This story got potential.. Storyline is good. So far, world building still a little messy but it getting better.  I like it......................................... Aaa............ Lot..........................................................................