Simp MC with a savior complex. Female lead is a higher status and I’m willing to bet probably a higher talent than him. Brilliantly written, I just personally don’t think I can read the typically good-two-shoes simp chasing after Mary Sue nonsense.
A really good original novel that you won’t regret giving a read. Writing Quality - Not much to say about this because there are rarely any obvious mistakes I can pickup on.Stability of Updates - There are regular updates (Though, there are never enough chapters when you really enjoy a story).Story Development - I like the current development of the story and you can tell the author is either well read or has done some research into the current specifics of the story. I would like to have a closer look at the actual system and the main uses of it for the MC, because at the moment the most important aspects I can think of are the map and crafting. It feels like he has been neglecting his responsibilities as a Lord in his own territories and I would like to see his making better use and giving a better look into the running of his current lands. With all the statistics available from the system I would think that he could create some medium long and easy to understand plans?Character Design - The character designs for the people that matter are well thought out. Even some side characters and the general attitudes of the nobles proves enlightening. The only thing that irritates me at times is the Main Character and his many tangents. Though, I suspect that is a design of the author on purpose. It just seems like the MC likes to jump from one thing to the next like an excited child and not being able to wait to show his efforts to all the people (Yet having nothing physical to show for that idea yet)World Background - The general lay of the world is proving to be well written. I’m not particularly well informed on polish geography and what has been established is well done, It would prove useful for the author to at some point once the MC has a stable land ownership to creat a map with the different colour coding to show who owns what (I find it helps with visualisation).Overal, a fantastic piece of work.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 8.55millionRating : 8.6(20)Chapters : 2423Status : ongoingWord count : 5.23millionauthor level : greatNo of works : 1Comments : 493Year started : 2016My original recommendations : Dadaelus : one of the best novel I ever read online and offline with superb grammar and awesome author bcoz he rejected the webnovel contract and gonna keep it free.Jay Aslan : one of my favorite novels on this site. Even though it's got very few chapters its really promise and Author's got great in music.Do check these novels out.
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I think the story is pretty good even if the protagonist seems kinda dumb sometimes, its still worth your time, i havent finished it yet, but the story seems interesting so far.
Hi. I'm the author of this story. You can call me Adivonna. I'm an amateur writer. I'm an absolute fan of stories with villainess main characters so I decided to write my own. I hope you enjoy the story.Btw, I pettily gave myself a 5 star rating. He-he' 😅
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