Pornstar System

very good

way too inconsistent...
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1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

Not sure yet.                                                        
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Literally this is one If not the worst slave system Novel that I have seen.

Read chapter 9 before chapter 1 becouse you will probably drop this so instead of wasting time go start there where you will hight probably drop if you are a slave system hater.


I sincerely hope the Author will be.... read my comment in chapter 9 I fear this Review will be deleted if I continue with my sentence

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you.





I can't even write a word of this novel

Nevermind I already wrote the 'WORD'

Only five chapters have been released right now but I'm already liking it. Adding it in my library hoping the author's not dropping the novel.