Author Note: All chapters from the first 2 volumes have been fixed, edited and changed to 3rd person. So if you've read it before and want to give it another chance, you might enjoy it more. ^-^
Author's Review:
-Young boy reincarnated into a new world (Immaturity + Inexperience and a rather hateable person can be present at first) But as the story progresses, so does he.
Growth is slow but In my opinion it's worth the wait.
Writing Quality I always try to make it as good as possible. Updates have been rather shaky lately but normally 2 chapters / day. Story develops rather strangely, it flows on it's own, nothing which is written is planned.
Character Design: Spiky White and Black Hair / Green eyes Young man. A rather unusual look.
World Background: Fantasy world, split and divided into 6 continent. Underworld and Heaven exist but have yet to be mentioned. <- This will play a rather big part on the story, sorry for the spoiler.
For those who ask about Harem, all I'll say is I'm not a fan of Harem myself, but once again, if that's what the MC wants and he knows how to get it, he might. (Harem is uncertain)
Hope you enjoyed reading this, Sorry for the long length. The book starts off light but if you can't handle a little tragedy and darkness then i won't say it's your cup of tea.
Either way, ignore this review and give it a try yourself, you might or might not like it. That's all from this shameless author. I have to get back to work.[img=recommend]
The mc is extremely stupid guy who survives only because of plot armor.
Never fight seriously.
Trying to not hurt his enemies.
And to learn a little he needs near death experiences his or his girls. (By the way he's denser than Japan protagonists)
Simply put he disappointing you again and again.
I read a few chapters more in hopes it goes better.
Listen, if your new to webnovel and like isekai than this novel is for you, but tbh the plot and cliches in the book is like a copy and paste of every other isekai be it novel, manga, or anime. So for experienced readers who are sick of the same plot outline then steer clear and save yourselves the lost time.
Now feedback for author San, not bad at all for the novel, it was kinda rushed at the beginning and felt slightly forced, but everything connected and the flow of speech and storyline made sense so congrats on that.
(Plz dont use the typical isekai plot template for a novel ever again, although the loli is not a bad idea and attracts more readers you gotta be careful that it doesn't transform into a typical oversaturated plotline)
Chapters can still improve after a round of edit. I suggest you do that once you've reached chapter 10. Keep up the good work and best wishes to you and to our little John in the story.
Also, I would appreciate it if you can drop a review of my novel too—The Last Dragon Hunter. Thanks in advance!
can't really bring myself to like it. first chapter writing quality was nice, but later on everything became too rushed. actions that mc took didnt have any reason behind them. i mean in first few chapters mc suddenly gets himself a girl, learns magic, is talent poached by king and so on. premise by itself is really interesting, but story isnt living up to it. :(
I just love this book enough that I’m willing to give it another great review. (Plus reviews give the daily 5 exp) I would recommend this book to any chem nerd with an interest in magic.
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Author's Review:
-Young boy reincarnated into a new world (Immaturity + Inexperience and a rather hateable person can be present at first) But as the story progresses, so does he.
Growth is slow but In my opinion it's worth the wait.
Writing Quality I always try to make it as good as possible. Updates have been rather shaky lately but normally 2 chapters / day. Story develops rather strangely, it flows on it's own, nothing which is written is planned.
Character Design: Spiky White and Black Hair / Green eyes Young man. A rather unusual look.
World Background: Fantasy world, split and divided into 6 continent. Underworld and Heaven exist but have yet to be mentioned. <- This will play a rather big part on the story, sorry for the spoiler.
For those who ask about Harem, all I'll say is I'm not a fan of Harem myself, but once again, if that's what the MC wants and he knows how to get it, he might. (Harem is uncertain)
Hope you enjoyed reading this, Sorry for the long length. The book starts off light but if you can't handle a little tragedy and darkness then i won't say it's your cup of tea.
Either way, ignore this review and give it a try yourself, you might or might not like it. That's all from this shameless author. I have to get back to work.[img=recommend]
Never fight seriously.
Trying to not hurt his enemies.
And to learn a little he needs near death experiences his or his girls. (By the way he's denser than Japan protagonists)
Simply put he disappointing you again and again.
I read a few chapters more in hopes it goes better.
Now feedback for author San, not bad at all for the novel, it was kinda rushed at the beginning and felt slightly forced, but everything connected and the flow of speech and storyline made sense so congrats on that.
(Plz dont use the typical isekai plot template for a novel ever again, although the loli is not a bad idea and attracts more readers you gotta be careful that it doesn't transform into a typical oversaturated plotline)
Chapters can still improve after a round of edit. I suggest you do that once you've reached chapter 10. Keep up the good work and best wishes to you and to our little John in the story.
Also, I would appreciate it if you can drop a review of my novel too—The Last Dragon Hunter. Thanks in advance!
Ps: character development could be improved
Other than that, it's really good