Haven't read to much of this one, just started out but I need to say: great f*cking story mate! Love the MC and it feels like a fresh take on the classic vrmmorpg genre. Hope it stays as good as it is up until now.
Gonna continue to read, if my review should change i'll Update in the comments.
7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way?
Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information.
Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating.
Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off.
Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it.
Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno.
Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original.
World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.
I don't know what to say ....
how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player
the one star missing from world background you could have done better
2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example
you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like
(any name)
gender
npc or player
health / mana etc.
there is no need for skills ....
just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to do
to make easier to understand the plot
story its OK etc
summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction
like confused what's happening in novel
I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing)
other than that it very excellent
as you cans see from other reviews
The Adult Content tag should be removed since the explicit scenes have been removed.
Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos
This is my favorite story on Webnovel, and one of my favorites over all. That's saying something since I've read thousands of books not including Webnovel, royal road, or other serial sources. I highly recommend this story if you have any interest in litrpg, videogames, it just fantasy in general. Definitely worth the coins, spirit stones, fast passes, etc.
At first it was a little slow for me to understand but around chapter 20 I figured stuff out and now I'm addicted to it binge read all 180 something chapters in one go did nothing but read all day
very good sexy novel. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Cant wait for more and this amazing world just keeps getting better every time a new chapter drops he can't wait to see what's coming next... the story has drama humor action adventure learning and growth it's pretty well edited and overall it's easy to enjoy the characters what more can you ask for in a book
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Gonna continue to read, if my review should change i'll Update in the comments.
Would definitely recommend!
Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information.
Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating.
Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off.
Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it.
Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno.
Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original.
World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.
how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player
the one star missing from world background you could have done better
2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example
you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like
(any name)
gender
npc or player
health / mana etc.
there is no need for skills ....
just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to do
to make easier to understand the plot
story its OK etc
summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction
like confused what's happening in novel
I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing)
other than that it very excellent
as you cans see from other reviews
Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos
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