Well they did it again, was being translated by another already (260ish ch in), last i checked wasnt an abandoned story either. So yeah good story but please support the original translator
for everyone complaining about the word "fairy" being used, download this chrome extension, https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/search-and-replace/bldchfkhmnkoimaciljpilanilmbnofo, and replace the word fairy with immortal or cultivation. It isn't perfect but it works
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
The theme of cultivation being a side concept for the 'BL' world is an interesting find, and I think the novel will rake in the views and attention it deserves if the prioritization remains that way (so that cultivation doesn't waylay the BL romance)!Overall, the story is great. A characters possess the proper generic attributes dependent on their origin or race - humans possess clear, intrinsic or external flaws, similar to how spirits and demon characters have specific weaknesses or strengths. This is being portrayed nicely in the first four chapters, and outshines a good chunk of what you can find in Webnovel's archives.The only thing I would suggest during later revision is to check whether the tense is appropriate for smooth transitions between instances and actions. From my opinion, the wording scheme can be altered between instances from past to present instead of strictly adhering to a single attribute to add variety, but the method you employed worked as well!Good Work! This is definitely going into the library of someone who doesn't read BL novels!
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I have to be honest, the intial story hooked me up, but at some point it bores me when nothing still happens. On the other hand, I am excited on what will happen next. I enjoyed Colby, Donald and Heidi. Keep it up Kid!
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