i can't talk about writing quality since i'm not good with that myselfsince some chaps are locked i won't talk about stabilitystory: mc has too clear memory of things, most people will have at most hazy memory of things they've did in the past if they didn't repeat that thing memories much. Mc also for some fuckin reson just jumps into bed of women, stress can make someone less rational but for **** sake mc is going for sage look but he doesn't care about stdscharacters are lifelikeworld background aside from being a little unrealistic it's okay
im very upset that you have not finished this book if you have a problem then just go with the flow but please finish this book. I was going through such depression then I found this book and a couple others that you wrote then stopped those as well please I'll give my left hand for you to finish this one plese
This story is just god awful. Don't read it. We have an extremely boring plot with an MC who just watches people play a game and a "loli" by his side who the MC decides to kiss and be a pedo. The readers seem to lap it up.
Another of DMC's hit books! I feel like my heart and soul is stolen! Story Quality ✓ Characters ✓ World Building ✓ OP MC ✓ Updating Stability ✓ Story Development ✓ (Hmm, I think this one's as good as TGOPC... Maybe even better. Heh heh)
He was one of the beings that I gave my utmost respect, since even though I might be a patient person, I can never not lash out at my aggressors, so I really respect his way of dealing with them.
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