Truly among the best stories I have read especially of this type. The MC is aware of how he influences the martial arts he creates. A steady development, a solid world promotion and the ending for me is satisfying . Only problem is the minor inconsistency in names especially with Meng Chong overally it's very good
I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go:Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department.Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here.Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here).Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future.World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.
We like how the story is developing till now but we will like to have longer chapters and regular updates.The story has great potential so please just don't drop it in between .We will like you to finish it till end .
Trust me when I say this novel is unique, it is one of a kind and I bet you have never read a novel like this before. I have just read chapter 4 but I was already hooked by the engaging plot. Everything about this is original, you won't see anything cliche here.The characters you see here are not just some copy pasted characters you see from similar novels. You might suspect that the novels are made by one person and that they are simply writing about a parallel universe, but no, this is original. And that's why I have rated this novel as high as 6.2
I like the theme of the story, eventhought it copy many other novel l still like it.The quality of the writing was not good so it was a little minus but overall good enought for me
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