Hey, this novel is amazing! It has the best quality among others in this batch. The World background is interesting, the characters have diverse personalities, the logic is reasonable, and the writing is superb. The story flow is stable, not too fast and not too slow. The grammar is perfect and the sentences are not too long nor too complicated. Recommended.
It is a good book with interesting characters it, it has an interesting magic system. The sound magic seems like it could have a lot of potential.😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I have to say the idea for the novel is really good and interesting enough to pull you in, however I have a list of things that could be improved upon.- First of, excessive technicalities. I get that there are a lot of thoughts behind the magical sides of this novel for world-building's sake, however the made-up technical stuffs feels too much of a filler. Even after reading the 50+ chapters, it feels like I've only read 10 chapters of other novels for how little things has happened. Considering the word count per chapter, the excessive technicalities ended up affecting the story progression.- Next is the MC's character being all over the place. It's like his character is suffering due to forceful attempts for comic relief.During his time on earth before the tutorial, he feels like a goal-driven MC similar to korean MCs of the same novel genre. However when he entered the tutorial, he became more like an arrogant self-entitled chinese MC. I don't know if it's to make him "cool
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