The MC is so dumb, how can he not understand what the system does. I could have done way better than him with the system. In the starting the story was so good I am disappointed with what happened to the story. Maybe rewrite from when he wants to relocate his shop.
Webnovel is just down bad right now. It's own trial stories are actually MTL. I can see this app won't be popular as it is soon if they keep going in this direction.
Amazing first 19 Chapters. We have growing world tension and world building (the mystery surrounding the changes in the past millenia is rife with conspiracy). Although our MC is Chinese he immediately dons his character’s name…major plus for acclimating to his ”new” environment. Translation quality is also superb.Hmm…No annoying characters (yet), a compelling overarching mystery driving the plot forward, and a decent MC (hopefully he gets more development when he interacts with his old companions)…5 Stars. 😍
Hearing that smooth sounds, simple sounds, but sounds how was played with class and calm, the aged man started to play his clarinet, completing the smooth and simple sounds of the flute, making a great music, how make the bakery have a good vibe, and make everybody like's the music that sounded from the flute and the clarinet.
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