Path of the Greatest Empire

This is my first novel, so please be forgiving with the story. If you have any suggestion, crirics, or anything, I'd love to have them. Seriously though I need them it's kinda dead without the lol

I haven't read much ngl, but in my opinion it's super captivating and enjoyable, I don't read much but I got recommended this book for my first book on Webnovel by a friend who reads a lot more than me, and I think it's great! There are a few grammar errors but I mean, I'm not surprised, I bet it would be the same for me. Anyways, i thought id leave a review cause i cant send any gifts, so just wanted to help!

Very good so far, i do feel that Vivian could be doing more with her future knowledge but I am only 15 chapters in so far so we shall see as the story progresses

"Hahaha!" Cole heard their minds and made a hoarse laugh. "No worries, I will not hurt you. You'll just be sleeping." He bent his knees and patted their shoulders.

"But what?" Tanong nito

Three black line appeared in his forehead, he calmly asked, Why did I became your master?

"Sebenarnya ada yang ingin aku katakan, tapi jika kau belum merasa sehat, aku akan menunggu sampai kau pulih dulu."

It has been a few months since I have sponsored my first set of trainers. I am surprised by what they have achieved in these three months.