Writing quality is acceptable...
Story line is interesting...
There are some interesting girls despite the early chapters...
Overally a good dual cultivation novel.. looking forward for further content...
If you like dual cultivation novels then look no further and give this a try. Writing quality is fine (I didn't find any mistakes with my meager ability) and the plot even though some what generic is interesting. Unfortunately I found the story too early and now I have to wait for more chapters!!!!!
As I've said in a previous comment in this book, I love mc's who are previously top cultivators who've reincarnated with their unimaginable techniques from a higher realm to the mortal realm. This story has captivated a self-proclaimed critic and enjoyed a steady loyalty and appreciation from said self-proclaimed critic. now it might not seem much to the unfamiliar reader of reviews , but I assure you esteemed discerning fellow reader that this is a great journey you want to be apart of.
First off, thanks for the content purple_mage. I've enjoyed reading so far. A few things I'd like to say. Please work on your grammar and spelling. I think you just need to proofread a bit more and it will fix most of the mistakes. In terms of the story itself and moving forward, I think you should really keep in mind: A. pacing B. conflict . Right now the pacing is moving very fast, which is fine, but just be careful because if you do slow it down, it can be jarring for the reader. The only real downside to fast pacing is character development can be kind of neglected in favor of fast plot. In terms of conflict.. I think it's no secret that our MC is OP, and that is intended. Which is just fine. You just have to get creative to write a real conflict for him to face. Remember, not all conflicts have to involve swords and bloodshed and who has the higher cultivation realm. Finally, I REALLY hope you, in future, put some love into character development, especially for the female characters (the harem). Interactions, dialogue, maybe even dedicated chapters from the woman's perspective? A little bit of love can go a long way. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take things!
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
It's a good novel, the story is very interesting, but I feel that even though it's a double cultivation novel, it has a lot of lemons, so much so that it makes the plot stand a little still, I think that even in this type of novel there must be a consensus between the plot progression and the lemons
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Story line is interesting...
There are some interesting girls despite the early chapters...
Overally a good dual cultivation novel.. looking forward for further content...
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