Espero que no sea elegida.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Everything in this story is good except for the unrealistic aspects like Nicole's constant pouting. you shouldn't pouting an Apocalypse no matter how stupid you are
Many subplots happening all around, each intriguing so far. I wouldn't mind following the stories, just hope I could track all of them as it works. A Prince, An Emperor, A Queen, now a Man.
"You could've brokens some ribs and gotten punctured by them or your lungs could have collapsed which are both things I cannot help you with. You would have died all for this stranger we don't know. You went in unprepared." She looks ashamed until I say the stranger part, "Deren, she was being raped, I couldn't just stand there and watch that." I look at the firmness in her eyes and shake my head. "That isn't the problem." Her eyebrows scrunch up and I can see anger coming into her eyes, "What do you mean Deren?" I look towards the woman on the forest floor, "She's was already dead when we got here."
Great stuff, will leave a review again after a few more chapters. Really hope this keeps going, and I saw that this was a WSA2025 entry. Good luck to you <3 <3 <3
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