At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written.
I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form.
Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author.
I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters.
Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows.
I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest points
Also grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes.
This is one of my favourite stories online. Through the changes between each rewrite the author has evolved the world from a great fan fiction of marvel into two strikingly different novels. I am looking forward to the continued antics of rose and her Almighty Daddy.
Love it keep it up. Hope the ex wife doesn't use the child to get back in the relationship other than that more updates I like where this is going so far
Reading this on my first time in Webnovel app. Very satisfied. Excellent story with HAREM DAMN IT!!! A lot of sexy beauties too. Amazing parenting. More chapter please :)
If you dropped this story let me know. I've been waiting for 22 days for the next chapter, (I was 2 days late to the latest chapter) and you haven't posted since.
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At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written.
I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form.
Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author.
I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters.
Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows.
I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest points
Also grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes.
With that being said I think this
Will be waiting for more.
I wish you luck