Pal Lord: A Different Kingdom Building

Please don’t let this Zyla story line last

it's really good, u just need to correct a lot of grammatical errors in your book and I really love the premise, it's pretty original........

This is the book I've been waiting to read since it will finally have a villain to take out all of those annoying, hypocritical CN MCs that we read about all the time. I like watching those irritating MCs suffering

A funny twist on cultivation in the modern world. I like both main characters the great grandfather and the great granddaughter.                                                                          

"No, it smells like cigarette." With that, I took it off me and handed it back to him. "Thank you once again, Mr. Yi."

"But--"

Multiple thoughts were flowing through my mind, and a short but painful headache flashed through my brain as well. However, I knew for certain that I couldn't trust her, not now. Speaking of which, I realized that time was going as well, and that I had no clue what will wait for me outside of this temple.

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