The story is good and I love reading game novels! Keep it up author! The way you make the Arnis as a game is so cool! And I think you should put VRMMORPG to be exact!
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Great story so far! I admire how much effort you put into building the game background for your story. Those details! Keep it up! I look forward to the rest of your story. Definitely adding this to my recommended list!
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Anyway, it has a great start. There is a problem actually.
I guess to make this story longer is to explain the setting that would makes us/readers join in your world
But good job! For the new writer
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