Ok so I’ve been caught up on 2 other of authors books and honestly this is my favorite one. You’ve progressed do much as a writer and the characters feel way more real here rather than wish fulfillment fillers. If everyone can match the main wife and be developed this could be very popular.
Take this as more as a slice of life with a deeper main plot.
So far the progress is not bad, the pace is slow, and you have to build a good and realistic relationship between him and his harem. I hope you don't rewrite this novel for the fourth time. Good luck...
If you have read any of the Author's other works and liked them, then you will thoroughly enjoy this one. This is definitely the Author's most refined work. The world building is good without too much of an info dump, and you are given more as needed. The pacing is good, and you get 2 chapters a day(as of this review), so there is enough content, but still leaves you wanting more. The characters are also well developed and have their own personalities and relationships outside of what they have with the MC. Give this one a shot of you like these types of novels.
Out of 3 of the novels I have read from this author(Otherworldly Cultivator, Zhang Fei and Primordial Dual Cultivator Dragon), I consider this one the best. Second being Zhang Fei. I feel this novel has more refined elements (Here I mean it has been revised many times) than his other works. I feel this is a GREAT READ. To the Author: I really appreciate that you write 3 novels together with Daily Updates on them. Great Work.
This novel is a rewrite of Otherworldly Cultivator (My very first novel) and also Returned as Dual Cultivator With Spirit System (My third novel). For those of you who have read Dual Cultivator With Spirit System before, you may still remember Chen Li's cruel, cold-blooded, and psychotic character. I'm going to write this rewrite slowly, and I'm also going to make his character darker than before. Besides that, you may still remember Feng Xian'er's character as his main wife. In this rewrite, she will still be wise and playful but also cruel and sadistic as before.
Hey, author. If I were to choose between your three MCs, I would choose Chen Li because he is way better than the other two. Although he was a novice cultivator, his mindset was much better than Ling Yun's, and his mentality was on par with Xia Tian.
Chen Li could adapt very well, and he didn't even need someone else's guidance to become strong, unlike Ling Yun, who was always dependent on Ling Xi at the beginning of the story.
Perhaps it was because the backgrounds of the two were different; even though they had almost died before, Ling Yun had lived peacefully since childhood, while Chen Li had constantly been bullied.
Because of that, Chen Li's mindset was slightly twisted, and he became psychotic. However, I can see that the current him is not as psychotic as before; he even has second thoughts about giving those women the soul mark, unlike before.
I hope he will continue like that and not be like the old one.
I like this novel quite a lot . The writing quality is excellent the story development is quite good as everything is connected, every character has different personalities so they have a hint of realism not your typical 2d although the girls easily fall for him they take time to accept the relationship.Updates are on point and currently we have not yet travelled to another world but we have got previews of what is to come .The only problem which I have is maybe my personal problem , which is mc is too soft hearted and very passive.Like I know you don't need to kill everyone everytime but sometimes you need to get proper revenge because they deserve it ,for example ,the enemies of mc almost killed him,tried to r@pe his lovers and friends many times, did way to many horrible deeds that definately deserve death but mc got soft,and mc many times is repulsed by the fact of torturing of most irredemible villains, also he leaves his lifelong opponents who destroyed his everything just because of women , honestly it's kind of irritating when you don't get proper revenge. He can easily take revenge by using his resources and lovers but he doesn't,I don't know why he is just waiting for them to do something against him. Other than my personal problem everything is amazing just hoping that mc can get a little cold hearted for his enemies. But I am sure you gonna enjoy it cause iIam still reading it .
Ling Yun is good, but I hope this one better, and please maintain the balance and not rushing to add so many women like Xia Tian, or it will ruin the story.
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Take this as more as a slice of life with a deeper main plot.
Chen Li could adapt very well, and he didn't even need someone else's guidance to become strong, unlike Ling Yun, who was always dependent on Ling Xi at the beginning of the story.
Perhaps it was because the backgrounds of the two were different; even though they had almost died before, Ling Yun had lived peacefully since childhood, while Chen Li had constantly been bullied.
Because of that, Chen Li's mindset was slightly twisted, and he became psychotic. However, I can see that the current him is not as psychotic as before; he even has second thoughts about giving those women the soul mark, unlike before.
I hope he will continue like that and not be like the old one.