You get no information about the world, characters, fights, levels, anything. The author just throws a massive dump of crap at you and hope it sticks. No sense of time, or development. You are thrown into a world where everything moves a mile a minute. If you want subpar writing and story and just need to waste some time than go ahead, if you got some self respect don't read. Sorry that this sounds mean but this story pissed me off.
Well, This one novel is the the one that i truly don't know what to say!
Right, I Don't know what to say and only laugh at it.
Reading it to the current last chapter(20) i only feel laughing to Death.
First of all i must say that as a truly newbie noob Writer, Author Tried his best to this point and i happy for him BUT the problem is that Almost many of these Friends of ours have lacking in the foundational matters like comprehension Meaning of Cultivation , Skill , Character Design and Storyline. In my view being an new Author Doesn't means that They can have problems in even storyline and story.
Lacking in grammar aspect
Lacking in Descriptions of Events and scenes
Lacking in Creativity
Lacking in Storyline and Events
Lacking in Foundations.
Author doing this in as Hobby. Or at least i didn't he wants anythings So there are not many problems for he continue this as he's gaining Experience. Author please first of all create your events better, we hardly can grasp what happen in every events. then if your writing this so please put more time on it and at least do cultivation and missions properly.
Muito bom já estou viciado kkkkk
Recomendo à todos a acompanhar.
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"Origin System" is a captivating read that immerses me in a thought-provoking world. The narrative weaves a compelling tale of self-discovery and the power of destiny, leaving me hooked with its intricate plotlines. The characters are well-developed, each with their own layers, making it difficult to put down. The author's imagination soars as they explore the boundaries of human potential, blending science fiction with profound philosophical themes. A thrilling journey that keeps me eager for more, it's a must-read for those who crave originality and a mind-bending adventure.
"Origin System" is a thought-provoking novel that explores the intricate dynamics between humanity, technology, and the fundamental nature of existence. The story weaves a compelling narrative around the concept of an advanced AI-driven system designed to create unique origins for individuals, questioning the essence of identity and free will. As the characters grapple with their newfound lives shaped by this digital framework, the novel delves into themes of destiny, choice, and the blurred lines between reality and simulation.
The author artfully crafts a world where the line between organic and artificial becomes increasingly blurred, forcing readers to ponder the ethical implications of playing God with human lives. Through its complex characters, "Origin System" encourages empathy and introspection, challenging our assumptions about what it means to be human and the role of technology in shaping our future.
What makes this novel truly captivating is its ability to blend science fiction with profound philosophical musings, making it accessible to both tech enthusiasts and those seeking deeper existential inquiries. Ultimately, "Origin System" serves as a cautionary tale, urging us to consider the consequences of our technological advancements and the potential consequences for our collective humanity. It leaves readers with a lingering question: in a world where origins can be programmed, what does it mean to be genuine?
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Right, I Don't know what to say and only laugh at it.
Reading it to the current last chapter(20) i only feel laughing to Death.
First of all i must say that as a truly newbie noob Writer, Author Tried his best to this point and i happy for him BUT the problem is that Almost many of these Friends of ours have lacking in the foundational matters like comprehension Meaning of Cultivation , Skill , Character Design and Storyline. In my view being an new Author Doesn't means that They can have problems in even storyline and story.
Lacking in grammar aspect
Lacking in Descriptions of Events and scenes
Lacking in Creativity
Lacking in Storyline and Events
Lacking in Foundations.
Author doing this in as Hobby. Or at least i didn't he wants anythings So there are not many problems for he continue this as he's gaining Experience. Author please first of all create your events better, we hardly can grasp what happen in every events. then if your writing this so please put more time on it and at least do cultivation and missions properly.
Recomendo à todos a acompanhar.
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The author artfully crafts a world where the line between organic and artificial becomes increasingly blurred, forcing readers to ponder the ethical implications of playing God with human lives. Through its complex characters, "Origin System" encourages empathy and introspection, challenging our assumptions about what it means to be human and the role of technology in shaping our future.
What makes this novel truly captivating is its ability to blend science fiction with profound philosophical musings, making it accessible to both tech enthusiasts and those seeking deeper existential inquiries. Ultimately, "Origin System" serves as a cautionary tale, urging us to consider the consequences of our technological advancements and the potential consequences for our collective humanity. It leaves readers with a lingering question: in a world where origins can be programmed, what does it mean to be genuine?
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