From the little I've read this seems like it will be an amazing book. I will review after I'm further along to let you know if I still think that is the case.
Way too much irrelevant info dump that doesn’t relate to the MC or anyone at all, the MC is a hypocrite and stupid, he has all the advantages that’s possible the ability to level up infinitely reaching a realm where he can pinch the strongest gods with a finger but he doesn’t like grinding thus he doesn’t do it, i mean grind a little exp won’t hurt, the mc wants to create flying city just because leyling in warlock of the magus world did, ahe creates it and abandones it creating it for the sole reason of plot so that the other gods have a reason to target him absolutely ridiculous, he spent all his time strategizing early on about what legendary class to take after shadowdancer, guess what end of novel he merely lvls up rouge to lvl 20 ,shadowdancer lvl10 without advancing to specialized legendary class , early on he said he wanted to advance to shadowmaster or other legendary specialized classes but author forgot about class lvl ups midway through focusing on divinity, only at the end of the novel he lvld him up +20 classes at once without advancing, 10wizard and 20 arcanist, no archmage no grandarcanist and no battlemage which are classes the author spent tens of chapters just explaining about how good they are but suddenly forgot to advance to them for no apparent reason, the mc said once he reach total lvl 20 caster he will advance to grandarcanist or battlemage but because author forgot about classes entirely at the end he simply added 10 more lvls to arcanist instead of advancing it for a stronger class, finishing this novel with a medicore MC who only boasts about how good he is but never took advantage of his previous knowledge except once at start of novel and thats it, he have the ability to lvl up with murder but doesn’t use it unless forced to by plot, has the opportunity to become strongest person/god but doesn’t take it afraid of being the strongest, also its never explained what happens to his children , or how he got into this world nor why, over a thousand chapters of nonesense just plain info dump that’s ridiculous, the author always forgetting what he wrote changing the story midway without any prior notice(clearly forgets what he wrote previously) but doesn’t bother to correct it or anything but just rolls with it. I only rated it so highly because of he translation stability which I appreciate but other than that its bad
In general, everything is fine, but the grammar is a little lame, there are words that are not clear, but otherwise everything is great, thanks for the translation. I am writing with the help of a translator .
As someone who rarely reads BL novels, I really got into this one. I'm not even caught up with the updates yet but I am curious to see how things will unfold. Of course, I already have characters that I love to hate and characters I hold my breath for and I look forward to reading more
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