I really like how you started the novel, with that 'old hag' can't imagine what our mc felt in that moment... grammar is excellent, didn't find any error, the reading flow is perfect too! i didn't have to stop to re-read some parts. Overall i recommend this novel :3
I'm on the Empress's side. It's too bad. There are lots of characters who would question why the Empress had to kill him or who would accept it as their sacrifice meant something. This guy is ignorant to the core. There isn't even much to avenge. If that's the case, after reincarnating he'll want to get revenge on everyone who caused his death in every life? I've seen characters who had it thousands times worse than him but never had pitted out [justice]. (In this case it doesn't sound like you could ever use that word. The background and reasoning for his actions lacks depth and logic). Guess I won't be giving this a try, seeing as his not only did it not reel me in, but turned me away
Great Story ****ed up by webnovel. It was updating at a chapter a day regularly translated by libersparkand then web novel liscenced it and abandoned it. Literally buried a good novel. Ugh.
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It really gets me angry see mc like this, they iq looks like -1000 and what makes it worse is the fact that doesnt affect them at all like they doesnt have a problem beacuse her actions
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