Online Game ~ I Have A Super Bug In The Game

Hi and good evening or afternoon/morning

I have finally finished editing the first chapter of this book and let me just say it wasn't as easy as I thought it would be

Whoever thinks editing a book is easier that writing one doesn't know what he/she is talking about

Anyways, I'll really appreciate if you guys can just look through the new first chapter and tell me if it's better that before

At least I'll know I'm actually achieving something

Thank in advance,

Your Writer

A very good book that has a lot of potential. However, the first three or four chapters have some visible grammatical mistakes. After that everything clears up. Really looking forward to more chapters!

Did a quick review nice one...everything seems nice...also the character development and writing quality.....Keep it up....also pretty old fashioned but nice concept....

Finally reached the 20 Chapters mark.

Arc 1 is almost complete, only a few chapters left.

Next up, 50 Chapters mark.

Thanks for reading so far. Hopefully, there'll be some power stones soon.

Lots of love.

Hello everyone, this is the author first of all giving herself five star because why not?

So, I have had a lot of complaints about errors in the book. Gramatic and spelling errors to be more specific and I have decided to do something about it.

I'll be edited the book chapter by chapter for spelling and errors in the grammar and the app I'll be using is "prowrittingaid"

That also means that I won't be uploading any new Chapters for a while

Thanks for reading this book up till now, I hope you can wait till I'm done with editing and not just trash it cause I'm not uploading new Chapters.

Until I'm done editing, have a wonderful time.

Love ya all

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