Writing Quality (Translation) ★
• Translation is a good or even worst than MTL
Story Development ★★
• MC transmigrated to a world called "Blue Planet" where a game called "Heaven" has fallen upon them, there's a ranking system and of course the mc has no parents troupes..
Character Design ★
• The mc is very predictable, with no development, just him and his narcissistic self.. He even wanted his saber to call him "Big Brother" instead of "Master", very cringe..
Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
• The same as before, no comment here..
World Background ★
• Just remember that the world is called "Blue Planet" with other worlds beside them and countries are named as "Dragon Planet" which we all know what country that is...
While I do like this kind of novel you can tell the author is bad about desperately trying to reach a word count. For example they will make a statement about the effects on a weapon and then make the same statement 4 or 5 more times as if to emphasize their point.
I've finished all 40 chapters and it's a good novel don't get me wrong at all but there is a ton of translation errors to the point sometimes I can't understand who's who not any world development for God sake earth is called blue planet and we learn nothing about his past life either kinda kills the story but if the translation errors were fixed I think this would be at least a 4.3
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news!
John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God.
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Popular Reviews
• Translation is a good or even worst than MTL
Story Development ★★
• MC transmigrated to a world called "Blue Planet" where a game called "Heaven" has fallen upon them, there's a ranking system and of course the mc has no parents troupes..
Character Design ★
• The mc is very predictable, with no development, just him and his narcissistic self.. He even wanted his saber to call him "Big Brother" instead of "Master", very cringe..
Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
• The same as before, no comment here..
World Background ★
• Just remember that the world is called "Blue Planet" with other worlds beside them and countries are named as "Dragon Planet" which we all know what country that is...
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John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God.
For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
youtube.com/livingwaters