ONE OF US IS BURNING (ONE OF US IS LYING FANFIC)

"Okay, let's go to the southern jail quarters" i said.

I enjoyed this story and can’t wait for it to continue ifit does. Despite the errors it is paced well. Please update if you can and thanks for the chapters so far

"Kach?" he called gently, his voice reading out practiced remorse. "Baby?" He moved towards the bathroom and nudged the door slightly, only to find it empty. It wasn't after he was about to turn away that he noticed certain items missing. Her shower cap, her sponge, her towels which usually occupied every hook on the towel-hanger, her Bugs Bunny bathroom slippers—all were gone. Dike turned back to the bedroom and found the closet door wide open and Kachi's side of it utterly empty. The dressing table was deserted as well. There was no single trace of her presence. Dike marched out to Travis room and found the same bareness and that was when it finally hit him that Kachi had made good her threat of leaving him. He began to boil in anger as he dialed her number. Her phone rang off the hook and he tried again but got the same response. He sent a quick SMS:

"Eh?"

A message flashed in the centre of Traey Rin's view.

The melancholic vibe of this story is its major highlight for me. I like how the past is initially shrouded in mystery and slowly revealed, then the misunderstandings🤣💔 man that's enough to drive me crazy