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didn't notice grammar mistakes, tried to give as much info, necessary to understand the world... though it sounds a little like an English essay

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It's an entertaining affair. I really enjoyed reading it, although to devote three and a half chapters to diarrhea is a lot... In general, we are waiting for the continuation.

Drop this novel now, so someone else can translate it, i have waited for about 6 months now.If you think like me than like this so someone can see it. Good evening everyone from Italy

This book really is the Holy Book, do not drop it, please 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

This is very good, the pacing is not too fast and steady for me the way I like it, I just wonder why the MC is not using his phones abilities that much?  In any case I need more chapters please

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YOUR STORY IS NICEIt's great that you update your story often but It seems like You update TOO oftenyou have an average of making 2-4 chapters a day.../DO YOU EVEN REST?!/but i respect you because the book is amazing.(Im gay. /lesbian/ )