The Exposition and writing are pretty alright. After that there is a sharp decline where the author blatantly pushes MC into classic situations. He coincidently gets made fun of so he can slap people's faces. He coincidently gets pushed into making a harem. You get the point, endless feel good Chinese webnovel clichés.
the novel is good but it just too slow and the mc is kind of weak with is kind cheat
what i mean is that the mc have and op cheat but is main strength is too weak can't even fight above realm
so the story has great talent, no doubt, with the way you keep writing and the daily update. in time, this book will come to be among the greatest of novels.
A good novel so far, the grammar is not bad it's readable, and the update is daily so that is a plus I hope the author doesn't drop it like other authors.
I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.
Not like other urban novels where the MC wastes his time on earth trying to get revenge on the family he has a grudge in the legal way and just goes on a quick killing spree which is nice. Other than the whole Disciple being typed as discipline there arent any typos which is nice
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what i mean is that the mc have and op cheat but is main strength is too weak can't even fight above realm
Overall if you want to pass your time it's a great story for that.