Great story. Everything is well thought without major flaws. Apart from the beginning when the game is introduced, all the story is online at chapter 101. The only weakness of the author is the lack of narration of combat scenes.
The MC is actually smart and not an average Joe described as a genius only to make dumb decisions later. The fact that being strong in the game is needed for survival is a nice addition.
It is an awesome plot and I can't wait to read more.
Got to chapter 64 now. The “supposed” start. I don’t mind lengthy explanations, so no problem in taking your time world building. The writing quality (grammar and structure) is good.
Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop:
-The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character.
- The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more?
- The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank.
- There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really?
-For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.
Not gonna read this for now, but, I feel like the Omni in mastery is unnecessary. Since Omni is a very strong and serious word. Omnipotence, omnifarious, omniscient etc etc. Someone with Omni-Mastery would essentially master anything and everything instantly. If you see someone swinging a sword at you, you would know exactly how to deflect, avoid or parry the strike. Why? Cuz you've just instantly mastered swordsmanship and control of your own body & mind.
Just, don't mess with the word Omni unless you mean it in every sense of the word, since that's exactly what it means.
As im still fairly in the beginning StaGes of the story my review is a tad bit biast but thats beCause when the book was advertiSed as SomethinG i would like from the synopsis that was true. now why Biased? Well thats because low and behOld i didnt even know it Was the work from the same Author of aNOther novel i enjoy. and Im completely caught up on that One which i would definitely give 5 across the bOard.
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The MC is actually smart and not an average Joe described as a genius only to make dumb decisions later. The fact that being strong in the game is needed for survival is a nice addition.
It is an awesome plot and I can't wait to read more.
Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop:
-The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character.
- The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more?
- The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank.
- There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really?
-For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.
Just, don't mess with the word Omni unless you mean it in every sense of the word, since that's exactly what it means.
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