Interesting! I'm a person who loves to read stories like this one. It's spoiler alone already had gotten my attention as well as my interest in reading...
1. Grammar sucks. I hate to say that I would rather read MTL than this.2. World background is unclear. It was said that MC time traveled, to what year? No one knows. And it also said that he came to a planet 'similar to where he lives before'. So, is it Earth or not? No explanation. Is it time travel or transmigration? No explanation.3. Story development is absurd. It is like reintroducing mana type of novel. The idea is great but how can they classify the strength system of humans and beasts alike to a high degree and develop medicines to enhance abilities IN ONE SINGLE YEAR?? I MEAN, HOW THE HECK?? Are apocalypse and R&D a joke to you? And do you know why the world changes? Because of system! Why is it like that? How is it possible? The answer is: plot armor. You just shut up and read.4. MC. Last but not least is our dear, beloved, and shining MC. There is one reader I notice commenting on MC's retardation, the absurd situation, and many more. You should read it, his is more refreshing than mine. In my opinion, MC (who is now a tree) is distressed by the oncoming war between humans and beasts. In one place, he is a former human, and in another place his subordinates hates the humans for a perfectly normal reason. The humans killed and ate their kin and descendants.So, MC decided to stay in the sidelines and keep neutral. A satisfying scenario you said? Yes, except that MC is a hypocrite. He killed the beasts for exp but let 2 girls go after he ordered a poisonous snake to bit them and then ask his subordinates (beasts of course) whether what he'd done was right or wrong. That's cruel you said? Heh. Why is he interested with them? The girls are young and beautiful. I really want to call the police. To no surprise after that MC is discovered by human and then human attacked and then people died and then human's fiancee take revenge and then MC slaughter their whole family....Nope. The MC decided to keep the fiancee in the forest with him (that lecher). The fiancee apparently wanted to kill one of his subordinates, the MC knew and even told his subordinates of it, yet still decided to keep her. I'm speechless. MC's idiocy know no bounds. His subordinates who saw their master caught in a 'honey trap' wants to kill her but MC punish them in a heavy-handed way and single-mindedly protect her. What is his explanation you said? I AM THE KING! ....At this point I really pitied them and began to hope for them to riot, start a coup, backstab the MC, rip his body to pieces and distribute it among themselves.
I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for readers, I can tell you I don't have many friends to share this with, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you continue the story through the end and have a satisfying ending, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you, but if you EVER drop this, I will look for you... I will find you... and I will.... lock you in my basement until you continue writing :p
It's actually insane this madreader guy only has 37 chapter a out right now but he has almost 300 reviews with a 4.9 average rating, which means his novel must be one of the highest top rated novels. And yet it's a hidden gem? Why is he not milking this and releasing more? Why is he not featured or trending?
I am the soul of my accountExp is my body and coin is my bloodI have created countless reviewsUnaware of the congruity, Nor aware of the qualityWithstood critics to create reviews, Waiting for one's acceptanceI have no shame. This is the easiest wayMy whole life was Unlimited Useless Reviews
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