Obsessed with my boss

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

it is very repetitive and your mail mother f***** man character is an idiotic and arrogant b**** and he can't even think properly before taking an action any fee is his development phase even than he should be calm not doing some kind of idioting things that he has done in this chapter he does whatever comes to his mind he is an idiot not a logical and strategic thinker he is just a Brooke with the little bit of luck till now because I don't know what is going to happen is next chapters or upcoming chapters can become a good person or strategic thinker with some kind of fatal mistakes because of his f****** idiotic sheets that he is doing and if he does not change then the story is doomed to be stopped in the middle because I have seen many stories like that

I hope the author comes back with some more chapters. By the time I got to the academy arc I was hooked.

It was confusing  at the beginning, but things started to gain coherence later on.it has a great potential, keep polishing and writing, Mr Author.I get one-piece vibes from it, though. hope it'll be as wonderful.

I finally surpassed the 50k words, so I guess it's a good time for a shameless author review...or maybe not exactly, I don't know.Think of this web novel as a prototype, I intend (if possible) to make it better and more engaging before publishing it as a book (probably on Kindle or something like that) so some things are prone to change in the future after all this is also kinda like practice for me.Anyway, I hope you give this a try, is not some masterpiece and is still just at the start, but im quite proud of this web novel.

The first chapter of Echoes of the End immediately pulled me in with its haunting atmosphere and vivid descriptions of Blackthorn. Eleanor's curiosity and her uneasy dynamic with Lena felt real, making me connect with their struggles and fears. The Obelisk’s eerie presence was unsettling in the best way, and the closing scene with the shadowy figure sent chills down my spine. I love how the mystery of their mother ties into the larger story—it’s personal and intriguing. This chapter hooked me with its suspense, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes!

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