Obligada a salir con un magnate

    Author: Mr. Yan
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Kanyi
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    {My head is killing me, might as well finally sleep off this headache.} He thought, before clapping his hands and turning off the lights he left on most of the day, going to bed. Not long after, Kuujo's drifts into the familiar, comforting darkness away from the pressures of the world. Drifting along in the endless void that was his mind took shape around him, pushing his body through what seemed to be a fogged door. As his body grew faster, parts of the fog around the door wrapped under his body, swinging abruptly open with his body mere inches from the object. The door closed behind fading into the nothingness allowing the place to disperse and flash as a white light encapsulates his presence regressing his age and revitalizing it with new life.
  1. Demon6746
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    Selevina memiliki wajah bingung.
  1. HC_Pwnography
    HC_Pwnography rated it
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    "Bila...hari ini kita ga usah keluar kamar ya".
  1. DarkFight3r8fc
    DarkFight3r8fc rated it
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    He said "we're leaving
  1. deradamsel
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    "Yes."
  1. SpiritsHerald
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    This book started out phenomenally but it nose dived in my opinion. The Abyssal Saga was easily the best.. The Story telling, the character interactions, you felt more connected to the characters. I feel like the quality of writing went downhill after Variant reached Rank 7 (Celestial)... I don't feel anything for any of the characters now. Sia had a great story (initially) so did Sarah, Enigma, Evander, Charles Xander, and many more (Bali, Irene, Julius, etc). Shid even Hedon (Abyssal Emperor) had quality to him. You don't feel that connection anymore and the plot feels stale now... I really hate that I'm bashing this book because the writing was Amazing for the first 1100 chapters, and actually great up until 1400 and some change. I finally decided to drop at almost 1600 chaps, but the author still deserves his flowers for the 1st 1300 or so chapters
  1. BeyondTheLaw
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    The Writing Quality is 5 Stars based off the average webnovel, with the Stability of Updates being very good at time of review.Im mentioning this all before because what im going to say is me hating on the story a bit.I dont think the concept was as well executed as it could be, or maybe its just my own interpretation of what I read.The story starts off great, but there seems to be so much filler it dulls the mind, and one of the MC's being this litteral god of weaponry who can create new techniques within a week, makes you want to see the other MC's (Rean's) specialty.And by 64 hes a fuckin blacksmith, now dont get me wrong, I love blacksmithing novels, but to be fair Ive only ever found two. Blacksmithing can be made cool, but it seems that by the time of mid-story, the author just didnt care about making Rean anything special.I mean he has the light element, while Roan has the dark element. There twins, when I read these details I was thinking," Oh thats so badass, theyre gonna have this connection of hate-portrayal (from what I could see by there personalities twoards another) where they actually enjoy eachothers company, but theyll never say that.Rean will be a master healer who benefits the tribe by supporting and giving ideas, while Roan is this master of combat who knows all weapons "Sure thats a bit dramaticized, but Roan does end up being like that, he is a badass kid who knows how to beat people above his realm of cultivation, he knows every weapon in the universe, he makes techniques when hes bored and cultivates hard.What does rean do? Makes fuckin low-quality steel and sells it off, then the next chapter we see Roan hinting to him to try and learn how to use the light element sense he collects it faster than Roan so he should master something of his own instead of relying on Roan, the **** does he do, he makes a god damn light saber.I dont think Rean is especially stupid, I just believe the author is making him retarded.Sorry for the bad grammar and the swear at the end, but this is just so sad to see such a great concept unexplored.
  1. WillTheThrill
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    Thanks for the story, interesting to start out and see where it goes.

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