Its highly interesting to see original and unique novels. The author is really good at writing the story which you could see in the novel!
Although certain places had huge paragraphs but still I would highly recommend this to everyone!
It was a fairly entertaining read, and I am looking forward to how the story will develop, though I am a sucker for military themed content.
One suggestion I would like to see additional worldbuilding to provide greater context to the fictional nations to have, so readers can gain a greater grasp of how national affairs are impacting the characters. Of course a lore dump is not necessary, but additional sprinkles here and there can elevate the quality of your world.
Never the less, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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Although certain places had huge paragraphs but still I would highly recommend this to everyone!
One suggestion I would like to see additional worldbuilding to provide greater context to the fictional nations to have, so readers can gain a greater grasp of how national affairs are impacting the characters. Of course a lore dump is not necessary, but additional sprinkles here and there can elevate the quality of your world.
Never the less, I am looking forward to the next chapter!