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The narrative style is different but well written with clear ideas. The childhood nostalgia and the essence of family and values was well portrayed. The effects of loss and grief and the understanding and support from the family and friends were really heartwarming.But there are many instances of tense switches and missing punctuation marks. And I suggest breaking your paragraphs into smaller chunks which will make it easy to read and digest.All in all, a book with great potential. A bit of editing and polishing will definitely make it shine.All the best
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Taking the hand of kagura, I took it where an empty trunk was, which I told him to hide inside until everything ends and that no matter what he hears, he does not leave
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