Trash absolute trash mc is abused every chapter different level of weak protagonists I read 50 chapters thinking it would get better it got worse more trash don’t read this trash don’t waste your time
I like it and hope it gets picked... I dont really no what else to say. The mc is a rich kid that's not brain dead like most mc's in this genre, the story progression seems to be good (it's only 40 chapters so there's not much to say tbh) and the power he gets seems interesting.Overall a pretty fun read and hopefully it will get picked, also how fo you vote for a story? I really can't seem to figure it out...
Well it's got premium and I don't want to continue anyway.You know, even with comedy tag, weird novel name and lame synopsis, it's still not tolerable.Writting qualities 4 star - it's could be understood, but there is not much detail and it's feels bland.Character design 2 star - it's start horrendous, mc totally deserves his title as cringe king. It's does become a little better, but author pull his character out of his аss in very fast manner. And he is still clown even after that. He still fails easily for every beautiful womens as simpleton and generally still cringy. He's little drama about being shut-in loser was flop too. Because previously it's doesn't get any noticeable hint of this. Just a conviniet answer why he is acting like sugar addict kid... And there is no major difference in his attitude after this. He is just fall more in love with beast-girl, but he is kinda already fall for her ...in like same day that he buy her... And she is too... Sigh, right-right, I shouldn't expect something coherent ...but still.Story development 3 star - he does try to change mc, I give him a credit.World background 2 star - practically no details of how this world function or live. Author doesn't care about it. And most of the time twist logic to his whims, making other characters to some really unrealistic shit. (like come on, beast girl loves him so hard after 1 day, it's not even funny. Magical girl from the cave literally dream about getting to know him closer, after mc little simping for her? Bruh...i don't think noble girls would be dumb as this.) it's wishfufilment, for sure...Conclusion. Even after all of this, I would still give better rating to the story. But it's feels like author doesn't even have idea or outline of the plot. Things just happen and mc live. Even in slice of life stories there at least some plot, but there doesn't seem any. And that's why, I don't think there even need to read further. Mc have no goals, no challenge (aside mental one) and no pressure on himself...evwn Makoto from tsuchi ga isekai was thinking about getting home and punching goddess...
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