This book is one of the classic cultivation books but with a unique take on it. Following the story of the MC after he ascends to heaven, The story is slowly unraveling a mystery that looks to be very interesting. The MC has a personality that you cant help but love, hes witty, loves to face slap, has great humor, and is ruthless. Also cultivates in one of the most unique ways I've ever seen. The grammer mistakes are little to none and the charecter development is great. I highly reccomend reading as this story has as much potential as LOPH.
I was pleasantly surprised with this story. I was looking for a story with an anti-hero as the protagonist, and this gem fell into my lap. Characters are fun and believable so far (author has released 19 chapters at this point), the protagonist process himself capable even without a System yet, and i an intrigued to learn more about the world and our hero's poisons. I especially like how poisons give him an unconventional strength, which can let the author use unique effects to have the hero outwit his opponents. Looking forward to reading along with this one.
A book not to miss, This has a very amazing storyline and a world full of possibilities and probabilities, you can’t just predict what is going to happen after reading it. The most amazing thing is the MC background, I can guess but at the same time I am still clueless as actually who MCs parent are and what kind of background he has and on top of it the comedic splashes in the book make it just more enjoyable, if that was even possible , The author has a flare for writing rarely seen and am sure if not dropped he will bring this book to an amazing conclusion
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Looking at authors track record I'm fairly sure the score won't be far off.
Why wait 50 chapters when i know your work will be a masterpiece if it's half as good as Profane Prince of Domination & Fleshcrafting Technomancer.
So noting much to say for now but i'm sure it will be and awesome ride again.
I only continued to read cause of the authors previous works, else I would have long left.
The first 20 chapters are all world building and prologue until he gets the system, which in itself is a questionable choice.
After reading that much you just feel tired out. There’s all these characters introduced that I simply can’t care about since I’m still waiting for the meat of the story to show up.
It’s supposed to be a cultivation comedy but I haven’t laughed. Ball breaking is not funny in the slightest.
I haven't even started it yet and i already know it'll be a masterpiece. Can't expect any less from the author, i loved Profane Prince, I'm loving Fleshcrafting Necromancer, i'll love this one.
Everything is perfect except for lack of R+18 / Romance . honestly I'm surprised myself seeing there's no R+18 as the author usually include R+18 on every novel of his .
It's got good main characters, but I think it suffers too much from the intentional "evil world" design.
What I mean is that everyone everywhere are just greedy monsters who strive for power and kill millions of others for shits and giggles.
Also most if not all characters somewhat relevant to the story all build their power in some way by using randoms as food for their cultivation.
This creates a problem in my opinion since the "MC faction" can't really have greedy power hungry mindless villains as friends, but instead needs to find "unique" people or simply mind-control subordinates.
This in turn creates a problem where everyone is mindless and the story predictable except for when the main crew does something smart.
Another problem I have is the use of ridiculously excessive numbers such as billions, trillions etc. They are numbers too big for a human mind to even understand the implications of. It's common to use in Xianxia for some reason, but I find it annoying to read as the implication of "billion" becomes a "trivial" thing to the story, making it seem not special whatsoever. Using 10 thousand instead would be a number one could picture in their head and still seem very impressive.
"Slaughtering a trillion people in an instant" > ...Uhh okay?
"Slaughtering a city of 10 thousand people in just a few hours" > You pretty much see the bloodbath taking place.
The story isn't bad though, and DPs writing quality is good, as it was in his other works.
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Looking at authors track record I'm fairly sure the score won't be far off.
Why wait 50 chapters when i know your work will be a masterpiece if it's half as good as Profane Prince of Domination & Fleshcrafting Technomancer.
So noting much to say for now but i'm sure it will be and awesome ride again.
Keep up the good work!!!
The first 20 chapters are all world building and prologue until he gets the system, which in itself is a questionable choice.
After reading that much you just feel tired out. There’s all these characters introduced that I simply can’t care about since I’m still waiting for the meat of the story to show up.
It’s supposed to be a cultivation comedy but I haven’t laughed. Ball breaking is not funny in the slightest.
What I mean is that everyone everywhere are just greedy monsters who strive for power and kill millions of others for shits and giggles.
Also most if not all characters somewhat relevant to the story all build their power in some way by using randoms as food for their cultivation.
This creates a problem in my opinion since the "MC faction" can't really have greedy power hungry mindless villains as friends, but instead needs to find "unique" people or simply mind-control subordinates.
This in turn creates a problem where everyone is mindless and the story predictable except for when the main crew does something smart.
Another problem I have is the use of ridiculously excessive numbers such as billions, trillions etc. They are numbers too big for a human mind to even understand the implications of. It's common to use in Xianxia for some reason, but I find it annoying to read as the implication of "billion" becomes a "trivial" thing to the story, making it seem not special whatsoever. Using 10 thousand instead would be a number one could picture in their head and still seem very impressive.
"Slaughtering a trillion people in an instant" > ...Uhh okay?
"Slaughtering a city of 10 thousand people in just a few hours" > You pretty much see the bloodbath taking place.
The story isn't bad though, and DPs writing quality is good, as it was in his other works.