Aurthor writing is just like a vergin **** who always thinks about sex and story of his own without proper plots. All his chapters either filled with his sex thoughts or about unnessery thinking. Like a child got some grate candy and just want to show of.
Another level system novel, this one has poor writing style. MC has a system that relies on negative emotions for upgrade (kind of similar to "God Level Demon"), but the story development falls far short of expectations. MC has average intelligence (not very clever, but not too stupid either). It does not help that there are too many extraneous descriptions that do nothing to advance the plot (feels like the author is adding on conversations/ descriptions just to meet the word count requirements). Not highly recommended (try God Level Demon if you are looking for similar game systems- a far better read).
This is an early review as i just started it & currently at chapter 25. (I did not read the Auxiliary Volume, i went straight to the story to see the actual build of the story within the content of the chapters)I find the story is paced too fast at the beginning & makes it chaotic as the MC is just starting in the new life with no real knowledge of who they are now & the author just jumps around with different sudden interactions to create plot points. The MC at times is oblivious without common sense & not trying to find out more details about this new world or to speak up, but yet acts on impulse with creating interactions that create issues. MC acts like people are too dangerous to stand up to question/interact with them, but then with one person they decide she wants to fight them to see how powerful they are.I will keep reading & hope this is just some hurdles as the author is trying to setup this story with their ideas & readers input & can make it more steady as their direction becomes more solid. I will reevaluate my review as i get further in & redo my review to how it is going IMO.
Someone face slapping their own system with it not being a cold machine or being able to force their hand? I'll read this purely to see that! (Putting all 4s till I read and remember to change or decide too)
Decent read .I liked it. One of the better trail reads. The premise is simple to understand and follow. It's a little fast paced in the beginning, but it gets better with more chapters
I have read the first volume and what can I say? It was amazing, and I hope this one will be two. The thing that I like about this second volume it is the fact that the action it is happening on a prison, where the MC is trying his best to survive this place. I am glad that Rodriguez is back, but the thing who made me feel sad it is the fact that he is no longer the one from Ruby City. It is a different person and this would make this volume feel depressing.
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