Ah the start is really good. to be honest I loved the descriptions. you have a good writing style but I think you can work on your punctuation marks. I saw there are some unnecessary spaces between the punctuation marks. mostly in dailogues. Other than that it's a great read.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader I got sunk in this world the author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read :)
Nice title and great book cover. The story is not one that grabs attention immediately but rather, it needs patience and a few more chapters to understand and truly fall in love with the character and that was epic! Nice storyline.
You have a way with words that make each read seem seamless. I like the story potrayed by the characters making their interaction realistic with an amusing theme. Great character development, overall a great story.
first of all great cover) FL sou ds fresh, I choose this novel for its ideas) I'm sure that the author will improve every aspect of the book in the future. pay attention to this story folks
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