Don't know where to start from. So I'll start from anywhere.
1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading.
So good job author
2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up.
3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first.
4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author.
5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.
this is the second book of this genre I'm reading. it's not my favorite genre, but every once in a while I stumble upon gems like this.
flow is amazing, pace is perfect. it's amazing!
added to my library and will be reading.
I stopped at around 80. Too many dumb things happen not to mention the CONSTANT POV changes thought the story. How are you supposed to focus on the story when every other chapter is about different characters that have literally no impact on the story as it is now. When the mc made an absolutely insane deal I just couldn't read anymore. Who in their right mind would make a deal where he owed an open ended favor to not just 1 person, but 4. The worst part is that what he got in return was nowhere near worth it. The story had my attention at the beginning but just got more difficult to enjoy. The story is probably good but it hit every little thing that I hate to see in a novel.
I highly recommend reading this novel and here's why:
It's writing quality is at a professional level and it makes the reading quite enjoyable. It's clear and non reiterative. This author's creativity is also off the charts!
It completely exceeded my expectations!
For anyone out there trying to find a good read, this is definitely worth the while.
(as a plus, you won't end with less neurons after reading it)
This story is absolutely great, do you want great dialogues ? Check
Great characters? Check
You want a lively world and great world building? Check too
For anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!
Nobodies mentioning it so I’m going to. This story suffers in only one way and that’s the social interactions. They feel very childlike and basic. Also the mc has some annoying traits as far as social interactions go and it’s off putting. Otherwise it’s a decent read.
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1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading.
So good job author
2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up.
3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first.
4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author.
5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.
flow is amazing, pace is perfect. it's amazing!
added to my library and will be reading.
It's writing quality is at a professional level and it makes the reading quite enjoyable. It's clear and non reiterative. This author's creativity is also off the charts!
It completely exceeded my expectations!
For anyone out there trying to find a good read, this is definitely worth the while.
(as a plus, you won't end with less neurons after reading it)
Great characters? Check
You want a lively world and great world building? Check too
For anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!
Hope you keep it up Author.