Naze ka S-kyuu Bijo-tachi no Wadai ni Ore ga Agaru ken

I have completed the WN version up until its raw source, as per the information provided, and I've only read the initial chapter of this light novel translation. However, based on the reviews, it's evident that the translation lacks cohesion, with places and events being confusing and difficult to follow. The transition from the S-beauties discussion to Sara's encounter with the main character in just the first chapter left me utterly disoriented.

There are instances where pronouns shift abruptly within a single sentence, from male to female and back, without clear context, often just a few words apart. I sincerely hope that a more accurate translation will be available soon, so readers can easily comprehend the first volume, especially the one scheduled for release in December. From what I gather, this story seems significantly different from the web novel, focusing more on the first girl and providing greater detail. I am eager to explore all the events surrounding her story.

So far, I'm really enjoying this story; it stands out from the previous work,WN, with a vastly different plot that I actually prefer. The only issue I've encountered (not sure if it's due to the translation or the original writing) is that sometimes locations and character transitions feel abrupt, causing confusion for me. Despite that, I'd still suggest giving both versions a try – you might find it interesting to compare.

The novel is decent, but I'm unsure if it's the author's fault or the translator's that the plot jumps around and contains sudden changes, leaving readers disoriented. For instance, in the epilogue, Yuna invites Haruya to express gratitude, whereas in Volume 2, their interactions seemed limited to just a couple of occasions. Initially, I assumed it might have been a translation error, thinking she meant "Haru-san," but it turned out to be Haruya. Despite these inconsistencies, the story remains acceptable, though it might cause confusion for some readers.

That was a very excellent story.....

if possible please post your story about Ezekiel and Alice and about that vampire Caius also

I loved your style of writing

All the best for your future story's

one of my favourite books...

I just found out that he knew about what the mother had given her to prevent her from having kids.I'm wondering if that little girl is his and they have some genetic problem and that's why he didn't want kids but he should have been honest.  I hope she tells him she knows he went with Bella.