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The book is very below average if im being honest and there is one major flaw that makes it trash. Which for some reason is the mc he has no redeeming qualities and it’s like the author isn’t even sure of his own setting. The author states he actively chose to be a loner so you’d think he chose not to interact with ppl cuz it’s a hassle, wrong he didn’t chose to be a loner he had no choice he was an outcast someone who was picked on can’t stand up for himself and lacks self esteem if he actually chose to be a loner he’d be confident and would just find interactions boring. Additionally the mc is the definition of foolish despite being a loner who has all the time to think he never does so, he can’t even come to the simplest of conclusions or think rationally. At some point he doesn’t want to kill monsters to level up or survive he wanted to have a way to coexist or some bs, beta mentality I swr. If he actually chose solitude he wouldn’t let insults phase him or even care but it’s like he’s about to cry every time he’s insulted. The fact he hasn’t approached to speak to anyone during the entire situation and not once has he used that time to think of the future or analyze his current situation to maximize survival knowing that the kingdom is possibly hostile to him. The dudes really pathetic is all Ill say and he’s not even interesting or have a sense of humor it’s just sad reading this I’d honestly prefer his bully be the mc at least he has basic survival skills.

First chapter is stunning and well delivered; love the cat and the humor added just at the right moments.Keep it up; you have a great future writing

Wow... just wow, I cannot stress enough that this book is... AWESOME. Like oh my god the stories, fantastic. However, the author does need to improve on the length as some of them are too short and some too long