and that's that huh. I'm going to assume you intended to take a break and it turned into an extended hiatus on this work. probably started writing another book? or maybe you didnt know where to go from here and didnt want to drop the quality writing just to churn more chapters out? Either way, I really enjoyed the story. There was more character growth in this short 200 chapter story than quite a few 1000 plus chapter xianxias... the story telling just seemed to improve with each chapter too. I found myself engaged and engrossed with the story, to the point where I didn't even notice the many grammatical issues. My absolute favorite part was the constant introspection of the main character. it really made the character come to life, and made me care for his struggles. While the world building was the weakest part of the story besides the grammar issues, it was not that bad and certainly served its purpose for the story. I wish you all the best Author, and maybe you will one day come back to this novel, inspired, and write it to a satisfactory conclusion. Afterall, we didn't even get to see Ayda meeting Dearie before it cut off! i looked forward to some cat fights between the two haha
This is your typical below-average [low-quality] story that Webnovel adores to spam us with. The protagonist is your typical xianxia hero, who continuously convinces himself that he must be more ruthless but apart from a few moments of so-called ruthlessness remains a naive do-gooder. It's a low effort translation, nothing innovative, new or interesting. What's more, the amount of reviews for this novel seem to be fluctuating. The number of reviews will at times just...disappear. Suspicious.
I very much do enjoy the writing of this, and as a big fan of fun fantasy and isekai (also fox women) i am a biased enjoyer of your work, cant wait for your updates!- huntressbacchhae
The pace of the novel is very slow in comparison with other similar novels in the same genre. Same goes for the mc to become stronger if not for the fact that he can fight more than his power allows , Also from the way author is going with novel it looks like it will take months to reach certain arc where mc meets his origin family and with some female character introduced which are possibly future harem members are way above his current power and knowledge which tells it will be a long novel not that i mind because it will be good but if the pace was a bit more than it could have been more enjoyable . like literally it takes so much chapter for mc to just turn from 11 to 12. as far as i have read i.e till chapter 400 it is overall good with some problems which can be rectified in future.
Sizing up the man before him, Niklas considered his words before he abandoned his defensive stance and let out a large breath. The little girl felt her hair move as the energy levels in the air around her suddenly increased as he released his stored energy.
"I know my Lady... But what about the fact that they said she had pieces of some deities soul?" Micaheil went straight to the point, she felt that this answer could not be delayed.
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