(Unfortunate author here, why is listed below Stats.)Website : qidian chinaViews : 53.49millionRating : 9.2(1629)Chapters : 563Status : ongoing Rank : 4Word count : 1.79millionauthor level : platinum No of works : 6Disscussion : 24871Year started : 2018Chinese title : 诡秘之主At last it's here. Damn I've waiting far too long for this novel because of three reasons :1. It's the book by my favorite author. 2. It's the best work from my favorite author. 3. It's really so fucking popular right now in China. (just look at the rank and views with only 563 chapters) But he really is an unfortunate author in this site. Reasons listed below. Three of his works are translated here. 1. Martial arts master : one of the best books with romance and action. This is actually my favorite romance novel. And martial arts fights are really sooo awesome in this book. But the reason for this not to be in rankings or popular bcoz one translation is ****, two no updates since atleast 2 months. Even with **** translation it was in rankings sometimes. 2. Throne of magical arcana : This is really one of the best webnovels with western magic elements with elements of science in it. It's basically epic magic, science and church novel. Translation too is really good for this novel but translator updates only 3 to 4 days a week which is also the reason it's not in rankings imo. 3. The sage who transcended the samsara : I wanted to try this. I really really wanted to try this. But it's said to have a very ****ty translation. People say it's a very unique and good novel, they also say translation is **** and end up dropping it. Now I'm really really happy because not only is this epic getting translated, it's getting translated by cktalon one the best translators out there. I only request one thing with you. Please keep the releases stable and I really thank you for taking up the translation for this novel. 🙏
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This is only a review on eight somewhat short chapters, but the story is well on its way to the main section (from the synopsis anyway) to the forming and fighting of Maddoxx’s squad.The writing is pretty average, it’s neither terrible nor great. There are a few missed capitalizations, but other than that, sentences are structurally correct. For details on the settings or mood, it’s mostly sound effects that are employed, so other forms of showing the story rather than telling could be added.Story-wise, the plot is understandable, but it has a few gaps that might be filled in later such as why Mr. Golden has a specific interest in making Maddoxx into a man and whether he’s done this before in some kind of program rich men like to pass the days doing; why Dimitri is in the cell/how he got there, if there are any other prisoners undergoing the same thing as Maddoxx if not, why single him out for torture; why the Russian mafia is breaking in and the possible connection to Dimitri.The torturing is somewhat reminiscent of Tokyo Ghoul. The character development from the torture could be a little more dramatically and believably done. Or perhaps added to that, more backstory and fleshing out of the MC. To simply say he’s an average dude with no dreams isn’t enough. Everyone has some kind of wish if not a dream, or some desire or hope. If he’s really so apathetic, then there should be some reason or experience that makes him that way. Or with the torturing, build up that madness and growth bit by bit.Dimitri at this point is better fleshed out/original than the MC. The defining reason why is his swallowing of the “gum.”I can definitely see this becoming a good story once the plot gaps, descriptions, and character development improves/get filled in. It’s just a few steps away, but nice work so far!
"Alright to the middle floors we go then." Keres let them take the lead as they made their way to the middle floors. The party easily decimated the groups of monsters they encountered on their way to the middle floors. While traveling Keres found out they belonged to the Loki familia and have been adventurers for the past two years. The only area that gave the group a bit of trouble was the tenth through twelfth floors as the mist produced in those areas impeded their vision. During the times when they encountered no monsters. June used it to get to know Keres better.
I've been reading your books for a while now and I felt like this needed to be done.Jk, I was planning on doing this a while ago but never got to it, anyways, as I said before I've been following you for more than a year now, and I've watched as you developed your style and bettered your skills. Though, I wish you'd pick up your novel, the plundering demon: Mammon, I know your probably busy since your a high school student as well, and junk, and I'm satisfied with what I've read up here, but...Ok, maybe there's no but's in my head right now, though, from what I just read in the latest chapter, chap 173, things seem to be getting good, and it seems like your planning on doing something to connect the timelines by the way your list is set up, but I wanted to tell you not to strain yourself doing this, I read in your comment about what you said, and you really need to take your time before you end up hurting yourself. Thanks all I wanted to say now.Take care, and lots of love TurtleMaster💕
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