Quality of earlier chapters can be improved, It a little messy but author improved a lot in later chapters.Its a slow life with trickle of excitement but world building is superb.waiting for more chapters
This novel is basically what you would imagine the son of heaven to be.There's a lot of exaggeration you would maybe even think if it is a gimmick. This novel is very similar to History Number 1 Founder, Library Of Heaven's Path and to some extent History Strongest Senior Brother. So if you loved any of these novels mentioned you will be able to enjoy this novel.
I liked what I have read till now but as this gerne is not new so I won't say anything about that but if you can do something that set it apart from other then it will be great but current status of it is looking good.P.S. Try to put inner monologue inside quotation mark.
At this, Jin Yahui turned around and faced the pink letters 'Master can die' on the transparent screen. All of a sudden, he burst out laughing, using his hand to cover the sadness within his eyes. He laughed for a few rounds before his laugher trickled to a stop, almost like a running stream that had its source blocked.
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