My Slaughter System

  • Genre: Sci-fi
  • Author: Cloudthief
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Charlotte Surrey
    Charlotte Surrey rated it
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    World background has been described very well along with the character design. The writing quality so far has proven to be of high standard as there is no grammar errors I picked up on. Few questions though - Will this be fast paced quick growth mc (what I prefer)? What is the update schedule like currently because it doesn’t show any number? As long as you don’t have any other things going on I would love to see a daily or more upload schedule. Overall though great story I’m looking forward to where this is going and keep up the great work!
  1. Jerome Wycliffe
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    Honestly this book is very good just judging from the starting chapters I have read. The way you write is awesome. You have a vast vocab and very good construction, but I have to say the only thing disappointing is the update schedule, I wont sugar coat it its horrendous but other than that everything is great keep up the good work[img=recommend].
  1. Judy
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    Another cool type of sci-fi. Hope the MC will find his way to overcome his ordeal somehow. I truly can't wait for its continuation. Hope it'll continue and quench my curiosity about what will happen next.
  1. Drew Cromwell
    Drew Cromwell rated it
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    Overall it’s really great .
    Really recommended it’s not unique I mean there’s a lot Novel that has similar to this but this one
    It’s really captivating. The world background are really explained well you’ll really know how to imaginary the how things work.character and mc all great there’s nothing much to say ,you can tell when you read it it’s really great especially the characters it reflect to mc’s actions if they are trash then slaughtered if they fine as gem then he take care simple as that.progression or development is really the main factor about this story it’s not forced and had way to much progression which is good since it’s not that had much fast pace also not slow as well . Overall its enjoyable.
  1. Gloria Bernard
    Gloria Bernard rated it
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    What can I tell you, author? The story at first is pretty good. The only thing that bothers me is the way you rushed things. As soon as the MC wakes up, he runs through the forest, after running through the forest he meets the road where he gets on the bus that takes him back to the orphanage where the children who intimidate him kill him, why would you go back to the same place where they killed you? unanswered. After arriving at the orphanage, the MC is thrown to a military school in minutes where he is registered and it does not take long before he finds an arrogant boy whom the MC is going to kill in a few more chapters, or even go so far as to say that in the next chapter. In short, author, do not rush the story. Things are going too fast. Not even five chapters passed before the MC who is a cowardly boy turned into a cruel one. Yes, two months passed within the world of history, but for the MC and for us it was a matter of seconds.
  1. Marcus Clare
    Marcus Clare rated it
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    Writing quality is something that I should consider as a 'master piece ' . It's literally too good.
    But updates r not stable. Do hope that author will sort that issue out.

    Am gonna to be permanent reader. Nice job Author.
  1. Burnell Barnard
    Burnell Barnard rated it
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    OH...MY...GOD!!! Being a sci-fi reader a heart, I definitely approve of this. It's original, it sucks you in right from the start, and the plot is very well done! Sci-fi/alien/superhero readers, you need to read this!
  1. Lennon Charley
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    I don't read Sci-fi at all. As it's not my favourite genre or anything but let me tell you this is really very different then what I thought. The concept of virus and it's effect. the writing style and flow of the sentences are just amazing. it came really smoothly without any mistakes. I must say I recommend this to all whoever like Sci-fi this is a gems for them.
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