Currently at chapter 632. Story has no substance. There's no real goal, it feels like the author doesn't know which way he's heading. Too many Arcs with no real plot. Basically, there's no momentum at all. No excitement. The villains get killed with no real satisfaction because...again, no momentum. Even the romance has no substance. The harem has no glue. All the side characters doesn't leave you with any impression at all. If i have to describe this in one word: Bland.
I'm genuinely surprised this turned out far better than I expected. I was thinking it was just another mediocre simulation story but there's some interesting stuff once you get past the first few chapters.
I am loving this book. I love how it is slowly unfolding. I need more. Author please mass release😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Grammar: 3 stars(Same as mine)Character design: At the beginning chapter there was not many character design.updating stability: Daily chapter is updated.World background: Only information about the surrounding area where Mc does his business is mentioned.Story development: In recent chapters, story development is going well.
This is an amazing book. That's it, end of reviewno but seriously, this book in incrdible. ayesha's character is no nice, it's not relateable. However how marcus reacts to thingd, is how I would. almost to the dot. It's incredible!The world building a descriptiond are absolutely my fav part. The scenic description at the begining is literally amazing, and then as it goes on, the sutle yet needed descriptions aren't too wordy, nor to basic.i love this book!
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