My Sect System

It irritates me always curses on things short minded mc does not know how to think almost always over react on thing it's just obnoxious for me.

The MC was a coward but suddenly turns courageous, when facing the boar he was like I close my eyes and you can’t  see me kinda scaredy-cat but suddenly becomes very bold. Also the MC is a slave of the system that has to listen to everything it says or he will get punished by decreasing mission time limit or taking away system points that is a slavery system not sect system.

very badly written too cliche there was no need for the girl, in the beginning, to be present or even be with the mc not being misogynistic but it's just too cliche I am starting to hate romance/harem in novels its just bad to me The system is way too controlling the MC doesn't fit the character of someone who should be the sect leader Everything is done too hastily

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I can't even get through the first free chapters since there are so many Grammer mistakes. I came to read what could have been a compelling story but I can't find it under all the problems covering the chapter. I have stuck through something similar to this to the 1000 chapter because they at least kept the mistakes to a point where you could understand the story with out trying to decipher it.

Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.

The premise was interesting as one of the few sect building stories on this platform, but the execution was ... questionable with a lot of grammatical errors and the story doesn't weave together well. The story has potential but the use of english was anything but well made

Wouldn’t mind reading more, just not worth paying for 83 chapters based on the free ones due to large errors and forgetfulness.

Hopefully Webnovel changes the system some day.